Friday, March 23, 2012

Week 9 Prompt

Not sure if this is right, but going to give it a try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who to hell is driving that car coming up the hill going like a bat out of hell? The hood is off. Someone obviously is driving. Someone hanging out through the windshield pouring something into the motor. Holy shit not slowing down and turning left out across the field.

Hearing the sounds of sirens and seeing blue lights. Here comes a crusier screaming behind them.

Oh my God, not cutting throttle at all the first car takes a hard left turn out across the field. Mud, dirt and grass just a flying. Hits a little knoll and air born they go.

Holy shit, I can't believe it. The cop driving that criuser isn't cutting throttle either and  going to follow them. What the hell is that cop thinking.  Guess that cop doesn't realize what he is in for. Hits the knoll, airborne and crash.

Boys in the other car done gone disappeared already. Cops pissed, stove that cruiser all to hell.

1 Comments:

At March 25, 2012 at 7:05 AM , Blogger johngoldfine said...

This is a single vignette, a single scene, a connected series of actions--but nicely chopped into pieces to leave out unneeded connectors. But I don't think it's a series of separate but linked vignettes.

Tell you what--consider this one of the prompts (relabel it) but try again with the theme for the week. Check out some of your classmates' blogs or some of the former student blogs for week 9.

 

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